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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

It’s getting worse and unlikeable, revealing a woman with a despicable character, trying to exculpate the slutty behavior with laughable pathetic weasel arguments.

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elling50elling502 months ago

What story did Ophelia tell her husband why she planned to stay away for a night?Where was Saras husband? This story need more character development, not just sex.

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I have a weakness for happy endings. When people face the worst, no matter how bad it is, I like people seeing come out better people for it. Remember what I write is fiction, it doesn't always have to make sense.

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