All Comments on 'Chastened Ch. 03: Sister Act'

This story keeps getting more interesting. It seems that Freya is carrying a torch as well. Looking forward to seeing if and when the star-crossed lovers finally reunite.

Still thinking my way through how to tell it, but there will be a Ch. 04 eventually.

Take your time, Alina. Writing a story full of action and dialogue is easy. All you need to do is figure out what you want your cardboard characters to say and do. The hard part is describing HOW and WHY they say and do things. I think you're doing great and look forward to the next installment! These are really intriguing characters.