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Click here"Like slutty lesbian sisters..."
"And then she climaxed."
"I thought you were going to swallow it all!"
"Only some," Lucy said, laughing. "I saved plenty for you."
"She did, it's true," Helen said, smiling happily at me. "Her mouth was full of cum when she kissed me afterwards, and we swapped it back and forth for ages."
"When we looked round, Mother was riding the admiral's wife, and we were about to do the same with Captain Winter -"
"We were blindfolded, by Father and Charlie. Next thing I knew, I was on hands and knees, a hard cock thrusting into me from behind."
"Me too. I don't know who - their cocks are very similar."
"And nowhere near as big as Captain Winter's. There would have been no mistaking that!"
Slowly I let my jealous tension ease away. Freya had played a little with the girls, but she hadn't actually fucked either of them. I could begrudge none of them their pleasure.
Take your time, Alina. Writing a story full of action and dialogue is easy. All you need to do is figure out what you want your cardboard characters to say and do. The hard part is describing HOW and WHY they say and do things. I think you're doing great and look forward to the next installment! These are really intriguing characters.
Still thinking my way through how to tell it, but there will be a Ch. 04 eventually.
This story keeps getting more interesting. It seems that Freya is carrying a torch as well. Looking forward to seeing if and when the star-crossed lovers finally reunite.