by OnlyHappyEndings
Even a less crowded quiet golf course has people all around. They'd be kicked out along with the husbands and the deal he's trying to make would be ruined. A story needs some bits of reality to make it truly erotic. This wasn't it.
Anon #1, husbands watching would make a good part two, joining in could be a part 3. Or maybe April's husband is getting his 3-wood polished at the same moment, if that's not a step too far.
Anon #2, "'This is like a story in Penthouse,' April thought..."