All Comments on 'Chinese Girl Adrift in Bangkok Ch. 04'

One of the best that i have ever read.

This is one fucking hot story.

There are hot stories and then there are volcanic stories. Forget the few typos. i am totally wet and cannot imagine where the next chapter will take us.

Exceptionally well-written, incredibly arousing.

I'm so happy and grateful to get such positive comments. Writing brought back so many memories, although some things a bit blurred. I was preparing for more shade as I know I was pretty bad to get into that life.. Just re-editing ch.04 for mistakes which slipped through. Thanks for patience, Z x

this is just fantastic, terrific.

This is very good, keep up the work, you're exceptional!

I anxiously await the next installments.

this one went a bit differently than I thought it would from part 3. I thought she would be rescued, not possibly sold into a life of sex slavery (though part of you did get wet at the thought, just as you get wet from the preg risks).

I hope you put in more about your feelings regarding preg risk sex and possibly being pregnant with a very unwanted baby with the father unknown. Preg risk can be so hot for a woman as that is what she is designed for - babymaking.

Please give us more about your feelings as only you know how you felt. The actions can be common but your feelings and reactions are unique, such as your realization you have a submissive side to you.

Lustfully yours

Master Paul, breeding Dom

Great story. I never expected she would end-up being auctioned. Who will buy her? What will happen to her? And, how will she ever return to the safety of her hotel and have to wear a choker to hide the hickey on her neck, Chapter 01.

This whole series is wonderful. If you really did all this and survived, I really envy you.