For me - this one was a bust. While I suppose the inclusion of a female to the story would qualify this as a bi-sexual story I found it to be much to gay centered for my tastes. But keep writing, I do like your Kink!
I am a bi-curious guy, married to a wonderful woman who loves sex, and is willing to experiment within limits. I decided to indulge my interests that go beyond her limits by writing erotica instead of running around behind her back. My main character is usually named Ian, but...