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Click hereSusan and Tammy moved in with Susan's sister and her daughter. It didn't take long before the four became regularly intimate. Susan and her sister ended up staying with each other the rest of their lives. They both dated other men while living together but finally decided to embrace how they felt about each other. Susan introduced her sister to Aaron, and after a long night of being pumped full by her son, her sister only wanted him when her desire for a man became too much.
Tammy's cousin showed her wonderful lesbian sex could be. Her cousin had many toys Tammy experienced for the first time. She taught Tammy everything her mother had taught her about a woman's body and how to pleasure it. Tammy's aunt was always more than willing to show her new things as well. Tammy had her brother be her cousin's first time with a man. Her cousin tried her best to have an open mind and even let him come in her. It took her a while before she wanted to have sex with him again but ended up enjoying it more and more. Tammy ended up marrying her brother and sister in law's daughter. They also tried to have Aaron get them pregnant with no luck. They ended up having many children together through sperm doners.
The Stringer family had many sexual adventures together and with other people. I'd love to hear some stories that you think they may have had in comments!
Thank you for reading my fantasy about this wonderful family. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Let me know your favorite part!
Ending is stupid and contradictory to the rest of the story. hypersemia, should have been hyperspermia Which means he's FAR more potent than average producing a much larger quantity of active sperm than normal
3 stars...
Too many mistakes, no attempt at fixing anything...
"Ripped Off Story"...???You did tell us at the start it is based on another story...just your 'work's...???? Well...'your work's falls short here...
Sorry...but not sorry...it was nice and long, fails to meet a lot of readers' expectations!!
This is such a shameless ripoff of another story in this site. 'Use Your Sisters Instead'. You know darn well what you did.
The story started out good see many talk about how much it's like the other story but the key difference are apparent. The father for instance ur's suggested incest but the other didn't and how the other story the kids didn't start screwing around until halfway though. My problems with this story is why did they leave and decide to split up that wasn't explained at all, another why decide not to let him knockup 1-2 or all these thing kind of screw up the aesthetics of the story.
Sorry but the start seemed like a straight copy of Major Duggan's "Use our sister's instead" but overall I was disappointed primarily with the ending which I felt ruined it.
Susan get knocked up clear into her sixties by her own father and uncle adding another 9 children to her already brood of 4.
You seriously need to get proofreaders and or editors. Using the wrong words by mistake or ignorance is inexcusable, for instance waste instead of waist. If you are basically going to just rewrite someone else's work, it should be much better written. I give you a 3, improve on these things and it would be a 5.
For my particular kink, it would have been perfect if Aaron was not sterile. The family would have stayed on the farm and built a multi-generational dynasty (not necessarily incestuous later on) that eventually ruled the community. 4.4 stars
It was pretty good at first, in spite of the terrible grammar and spelling. I sometimes had trouble keeping track of who he was having sex with because their names weren't included often enough. The ending was horrible and ruined the story for me. This was supposed to be an impregnation story, so he needed to impregnate all, or certainly most of them, and impregnating them multiple times would have been even better. The previous suggestions of the family ending up living in a harem type of arrangement was a good one. And you need to learn which one of similar words to use, such as: waste or waist; too, to, or two; peek, peak, or pique; there, their, or they're; an or and; but or butt; here or hear; heard or herd; etc., etc., etc.
I loved most of the story, but here’s an honest Pro’s/Cons critique:
Pros- 1) The closed off scenario where the family is generally alone and away from major society that allows this type of debauchery
2) the escalation from sex to oral, anal, and group sex was pretty good.
3) I liked the love angle with Alice and Aaron, and her acting like his wife while allowing everyone else to get theirs sort of like a harem, and no jealousy just hot sex
4) the insatiability of everyone needing to fuck or suck constantly is pretty hot.
Cons 1) spelling and grammar are atrocious
2) the ending sucked. Hard. And not in a good way. Would have been way better off to let us use our imaginations after the group sex encounter. Instead it came crashing down like a terrible afterthought. The ending took it from like a 9/10 to a 6/10 for me.
Keep writing, I think it was good apart from those 2 things