All Comments on 'Coming Into His Own Ch. 05'

my only complaint.....chapters too short.....:(

The time in between

I agree, Way to short. Love where this could go and lead too, but at 2 pages a chapter it will take forever to get to anything.As for myself, all thats been written so far would have been a great first chapter. Main folks established and a few things gone aery while ending with the attorney meeting. Just my opinion love it though keep writing (click, click) type lol

great story. looking forward to the next chapter

I have enjoyed your story very much up to now. I particularly like the fact that you seem to want Thomas to remain benevolent and of a good and careing nature. You have not allowed his power to turn dark. In a world where the lack of ethics is becoming more and more prevalent Thomas' character is refreshing! Please keep writhing.

next please

I have the feeling that a lot of the people that write comments here have never tried to write!!! I myself have tried to write and to tell the truth I suck at it.. To the readers that want longer chapters and shorter wait times . Be willing to wait!! It takes time to write a well written chapter.. It takes time to check for spelling and grammar mistakes.. Not only that but the writer has to make a living to be able to have their needs met. Please Please let the writer know they are doing good if they are. Let the praise shine to them. Let them know that you are waiting for the next chapter but that are looking and like a fish that took the bait you are hooked on the story!! I will get off my soap box now !! ( I know thank God right?) To the writer of the story keep up the GREAT WORK!!! I to am hooked!!! Be well and may the time and effort you put into your work be well received!!

More please! There is so much potential in your story line and character development thus far.

please give some hope for a touch of normalcy. It is needed for the continuity of the story and the characters you have created. Classmates, mother, waitress, Thomas, et al.