All Comments on 'Committee Work Ch. 01'

Well written, it’s a nice start to some sexy fun. This guy’s internal monologue made me laugh though...”I named her true self” 🙄 Talking dirty during a scene can be a huge turn on but it’s the kind of thing that has to be handled carefully because it can easily backfire.

Tess (UK)

Good point about the internal dialogue. I think that the editing process will need to catch that.