All Comments on 'Coronation Street Sex Stories Ch. 08'

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leann511leann511over 9 years ago

You seem to have fallen into a bit of a rut on your title selection. The title of a story is pretty important in erotic story writing. It is an opportunity to spark a little interest and sometimes act as a hook to catch a reader's interest. I really do like your plain speaking way of writing, not engaging in a fog of circumlocution as though an erotic writer can't use a naughty word. With stuff like net nanny I think the bases are as covered as they can be except for the most exceptional young hackers. I may make more productive comments after I enjoy a few more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hot hot hot

Oh so fucking sucking wonderful, my two girl friends sucked and and fucked each other into oblivion all night, while I wanked, I had to wait till next morning before I could join in, and an hour later another girl friend of mine joined us, the three of them acted out this story, then I got to join in again and fucked and sucked myself into a stupour, fantastic. You sexy sexy cunt. Muff diver Lanc's

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