by RabbleLaid
I’m still SO INVESTED in this story. Loved getting an entry from each person’s individual perspective throughout the story.
Hats off to my new favorite author on Literotica. Great storyline and great writing, I love the way hints of future events are woven into the story, The anticipation is incredible. This is also the first story that I have enjoyed that had incest undertones. RabbleLaid delivers with quality writing, and I cant wait for the next chapter(s),
Nice chapter!
One suggestion: when things match too nicely it can look kind of silly.
For example, in the last scene, Gina is going out and JUST THEN, Victor sends her a message. I get that the point is that the Cross are professional manipulators, but they can't be that perfect.
Thank you for the amazing series, can't wait for the next chapter. Any thoughts on Laura Harrier as Nicole?
Do you mean Laura Harrier as Renee? I could see it! I think I imagine Renee a little larger in the chest, but I think that Laura Harrier matches the confident sexuality that is Renee's trademark.
The girls need matching titty piercings and qos tattoos.
Best story on this site
I am looking forward to the next chapter so badly! Your other stories are great, but this is far and away the most exciting story I’ve found on this site!
Yes, Renee! No idea where I got Nicole from. Thanks for the reply and can't wait to see what you have in store next.
Best story on the entire site, you have us all on the edge of our seats! (Our cocks too)