All Comments on 'Cuckolded at the Grand Canyon'

What an awful story, not a recognisable or likeable character amongst them.

I do not give 1's, as they get scrubbed. However, this story is not even worth a 2.

Good start, ignore the haters!!!! Can’t wait for next chapter!! Start the depravity!!!!

If he’s a slave, then why the fuck does she care what he thinks? Slaves are to be seen and not heard. Ignore him, treat him like a piece of furniture. Leave him for a couple of years at some Italian monastery where he will learn silence, dedication and hard work.

Hell, send him to Antarctica to count penguins and see how long he survives without going crazy.

"Mistress and slave took an 8 day break from their ski season"...How can this a LW story? Stopped reading here!

My eyes are bleeding having read this crap.

The good thing about chastity in these situations is that it prevents them from passing on their diseased genes.

Nice premise. A bit too drawn out on the insignificant details concerning attire, vehicles, etc. The chapter ends at a good spot, but it could have been reached much more quickly without sacrificing the tale. I anticipate reading the next chapter even so.

When I read the opening that they signed a “mistress slave contract “ I skipped to the comments. Put these type stories in either Fetish or Non-consent categories. I agree with the commentator that said the chastity device avoided passing on damaged DNA. Unfortunately the author wrote they are empty nesters and this is a true story.

The part I like is Mick is a lawyer. I love lawyer jokes.

... But seriously: why wasn't this story listed under FETISH?

You're barking at the wrong audience, author...

Hey, if it works for you, but you had to turn in your mancard with that mistress/slave contract, I am surprised any other real men in your profession take you serious.

Wow….I’m curious why Whackdoodle goes by the name slave in this story?

Clunky prose ruined story.