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A/N: I hope you are enjoying the story so far! Slight spoiler alert in this note, so please don't read any further if you'd rather know nothing about what is coming in the story. No huge details or anything, just general direction of the story.
I am turning to you guys for some input on what direction to take a storyline. I've thrown both sides around in my head countless times and I can see both working with the direction I want to take the story overall and I've struggled to pick what to do. I'm trying to decide if I want to make Megan fall in love with Maddy so they are kind of a couple whenever Chris is with Kayla, but I'm not sure if that is the way to go or not. What do you think? I intend to keep Chris and Maddy together in the long run, so this wouldn't lead to them breaking up in the end (at least it wouldn't with how I currently see it working out in both directions). It could be a fun dynamic to add, but it also could distract from the cuckquean side by making it a mutual, almost open relationship. It won't come into play for a few chapters, so plenty of time to provide input.
Either let me know what you think in the comments or shoot me a message, I love talking to readers about what you want to see in the story. Thanks and happy reading!
-ASW
- COMMENTS
maddict3 months agoChris needs to keep Madison in the game, I don't believe any woman wants to get just a cuddle. Kayla sounds hot,Chris is doing her right to the bone. Why have one when two will do.
PhilLusty9 months agoWhile it’s been mostly excellent. It just seems to be repeating and repeating. It was a good run till it wasn’t.
RoJarooabout 1 year agoI know it's probably late to give input, but Brit is actually my favorite of the bunch. She's been so sweet to Maddison for the most part, and part of me wishes Christopher had settled on her as his other girlfriend. I would love to see her spending more time with Maddison and maybe forming the kind of relationship you've mentioned here.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis is the hottest cuckquean story I’ve ever read! Thank you so much!
Well, though I have to say that I’m not into the lesbian parts, I completely skip those! But the dynamic between Maddy, Chris and Kayla is awesome.
I do love that he loves Maddy though and bless you for keeping them together. It’s always a hot tension to wonder if… but if, in a story such as this, the guy leaves for the other woman it always ruins it for me.
I’m looking forward to the rest but of course would prefer it without the FF action. Please do keep writing cuckquean though. You do it so well! The dialogue between the characters is hot AF. Love it!
cat833942over 1 year agoThis really is amazing! Personally one of the aspects of this story that means the most to me, and that I take the greatest pleasure in is the blending of her friends and boyfriend caring for her, looking after her, out for her and taking all of these steps to make sure that she is properly being looked after, while at the same time being so totally ruthless in their usage of her, punishment and torment of her while they are playing! It is a hard line to walk, and it is a line that few seem to bother trying to walk. For me it adds such a depth and wealth of emotion to all of this, especially since you know that the wickedness comes from and is born of love and care, its not just empty and pointless cruelty, where they don't actually care about or even think about the submissive in their mix.
Personally I think Megan has to sort of fall in love with Maddy, but I end up with "sort of" since this is never going to be a simple traditional relationship. But at the same time, even if it is based more around the way an owner loves and is devoted to a very loyal and massively valuable pet, it is still very real and powerful feelings and emotions that matter greatly to all of the people involved.
Good to know that you are still working on this, and massively looking forward to reading more of this, now that I have discovered this very hot and sexy story :) Plus I want to know what punishment is being earned here!!!
AnonStoryWriterover 1 year agoAuthorHaha it’s almost done! It’s taken forever because I had a lot of stuff to figure out for it. I’m about 80% done with it. Hoping to finish it in the next few days! Sorry it’s taking forever lol
