All Comments on 'Culinary School Pt. 03'

That is totally my kind of Midwestern late summer evening! Great writing with superb descriptions. 5*, of course. ~~JB

I loved the story. The basic premise was sound and the progression was orderly. The sex was well described and exciting. I hope there will be a fourth chapter to see how their future works out. A restaurant of their own seems a good possibility. Only one error to note. I-75 comes no where near Kansas. It's I-70 or the Eisenhower Highway. It really didn't matter to the tale. Just wanted to show my knowledge of the area. Just started reading your stories. Will comment again.

You're correct, I meant to write I-70, my editing process isn't the most rigorous, unfortunately. I did spend a very long time searching google maps for the Buildex Plant outside of Weston just to confirm it was still there and yet wrote the wrong interstate, lol.