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by jd8406

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laughdruidlaughdruid3 months ago

Looking forward to many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I enjoyed every chapter of this story 5 Stars

bigboy1944bigboy19443 months ago

Great story and Great Sex 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

You could easily have more chapters 5 Stars I look forward to your next story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I have enjoyed all 5 chapters 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

brilliant

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

kinda sudden ending

Carp2021Carp20213 months ago

Need to continue the story

muskyboymuskyboy3 months ago

Very rushed ending.

BaldingBalding3 months ago

Good premise, good descriptions of sex, but the run-on sentences drive me crazy. Please try to get hooked up with an editor.

AardieAardie3 months ago

Wait, it's over?

BoxcarbillBoxcarbill3 months ago

Good read. Hope you continue with the story. What happened with Liz?

davp6255davp62552 months ago

Your wish is granted 5 *****. love to hear more about Liz

NormBNormBabout 1 month ago

Love your series. With each new chapter and lady to love.

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