by Elvenkraft
Innocence unveiled. Wonderfully told tale of initial experience. Is this love . . . or lust fulfilled?
As avsuggestion, this would be ideal reading for young people BEFORE their first sexual experience. Sex should be an exemplifications of love. Be that love which is intense, or love that is fulfillment of immediate needs/desires.
Beautifully written and extremely poignant.
Being an English person living in North America, I also thoroughly enjoyed the names assigned to these young lovers. Kept me on my toes while reading.