All Comments on 'Daughter home from University Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyable read but watch out for character name switches. Thanks for writing.

Just as the kettle boiled, Nicole appeared in the kitchen, naked and sleepy eyed.

"Hello princess, would you like a cuppa?" I enquired.

"Ohhh, yes please dad, "replied Fiona (NICOLE) and she came up and gave me a big hug. "Last night was the most exciting night of my life, I love you and mum so much."

"Oh Fiona, (NICOLE) I reckon it was mine too. I can't believe how close we have become these last few days." I said. "It has been so good having you here, It is going to be very hard when you go back to university."

"I know dad, but I am going to make the most of this week at home with you both." Said Nicole.

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