All Comments on 'Del's Story of life with Sharon! Ch. 02'

by BenSusso69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

IS THAT IT????? IF SO I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT YOU THINK THAT IS AN ENDING.

BenSusso69BenSusso6910 months agoAuthor

Sorry Anonymous, things got complicated, and have only recently settled down enough for me to find time to continue the sBe patient and give me some time.

hindsight2020hindsight20209 months ago

You need an editor.

You also need to research what makes a chapter.

This is not a chapter.

It is a fragment.

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