All Comments on 'Detachment Ch. 11-14'

Cracking story! Absolutely wonderful. The set up, the characters, the dialogue - just wonderful.

Don't want to be greedy, but is there another part? To tie up the loose ends? There are quite a few loose ends...

Thank you so much

You wrote this in such a way as to justify her actions. And this bullshit about living in the moment, going after what you want because life is short doesn’t work in the long run: after all, what happens when he wants someone else….and he will. He has no moral compunction against cheating if it’s what he wants.

Sorry but this was a paint by numbers.

Hey Adrian….thanks for a great read. Loved your characters and plot development. Enjoyed your gradual set up and little side trips to tease us till finally getting them together. We’ll done!

Loved this. Always looking for well written romantic IR content (BMWW) with thoughtful male lead. I respect your willingness to allow your heroine to have flaws. This makes her so much more real than all those victim/Saints we’re otherwise stuck with in the genre.

Best part though was your thoughtful depiction of the male lead.

Can’t wait to find more of your work.

Hey Adrian! I'm loving this story so much that I decided to support a fellow author and buy this book and Hopeium! You are very talented and you really know how to write characters that feel like real people with real emotion and problems. The plot is well thought out and written expertly. Looking forward to more of your work!

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