All Comments on 'Dripping Wet'

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kinkboikinkboi5 months ago

I’m surprised they approved this. Full of errors and really just bad. Get an editor and slow down.

ThisIsAMistakeThisIsAMistake5 months ago

Too many misspellings etc. Had to quit halfway through.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This a good idea but sounds illiterate.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor5 months ago

interesting concept but the errors ruin it completely. You NEED to proofread or have and editor. One of the first rules of Creative writing, Proofread and edit your work.

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