All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 44'

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SciFySexMasterSciFySexMaster11 months ago

After all the creatures, the massive amount of aides, it comes down to the protagonist and his band of true friends. Such is life, so many spend their life gathering acquaintances who fail to show up in our time of trouble. Remember, at the end, you only need 6 friends to carry you. Only eed one true friend of you're cremated.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I enjoy the chapters that aren't all sex. A little goes a long wayz.nice chapter

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

OK, this one was way better than the previous 2. Keeping thinking through the fight scenes, draw them out on paper if you need to. Really think through them. The sex scenes are OK, but try to spread them out a bit more, keep the story line moving forward with sex as the seasoning, not the reason we're reading.

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