All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 03 Ch. 29'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

It was fantastic. Amazing…

Oh, not the chapter… a squirrel just errands by the window. The chapter was another example of wasting so many bits and bytes on poorly written orgy scenes. Nearly everyone was killed and what do they do? Orgy. Leo himself is nearly killed. Orgy. Dungeon is invaded and every trap and hidden entrance overcome with near to zero impact. Orgy.

No wonder nothing gets better…

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Every third chapter seems to move the story along. This wasn’t that one in three. Yet another boring, repetitive and predictable orgy.

4095113814095113816 months ago

Getting mom pregnant is the best result.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

So how about adding just one of each level 1 monster girl

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

The sex becomes boring especially when you add a couple of chapters of sex for EVERY new addition to the Harem

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Top heavy on raw repetitive sex. Detracts from the overall plot, especially when time is critical.

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