by mypenname3000
It was fantastic. Amazing…
Oh, not the chapter… a squirrel just errands by the window. The chapter was another example of wasting so many bits and bytes on poorly written orgy scenes. Nearly everyone was killed and what do they do? Orgy. Leo himself is nearly killed. Orgy. Dungeon is invaded and every trap and hidden entrance overcome with near to zero impact. Orgy.
No wonder nothing gets better…
Every third chapter seems to move the story along. This wasn’t that one in three. Yet another boring, repetitive and predictable orgy.
The sex becomes boring especially when you add a couple of chapters of sex for EVERY new addition to the Harem
Top heavy on raw repetitive sex. Detracts from the overall plot, especially when time is critical.