All Comments on 'Ellie's Awakening Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

"So I asked Ellie to lie on your back and lift her knees up and open her legs." Perhaps Proof Reading would have caught this for you, perhaps not. You begin speaking to 'her' and change to your, within the samevsentence, let alone the same paragraph. Grammatically incorrect.

The story is FANTASTIC, however and is definitely a recommended read.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

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Enthralled by erotic literature and audio written by women as an insight into their delicious sexuality and sensuality. Early 60s UK guy here to enjoy all things erotic, write stories, enjoy the threads and hopefully to connect with women to explore my own sexuality. I'm slim,...

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