by fantasyboy
I think it would have been even hotter if Emily had been really shy, explaining why she hadn't yet had sex. Then they should have all been more hesitant to engage in such taboo activities, which would have been like edging the reader. Finally, when they committed an incestual act, they should have thought or talked about how much hotter it was because it was taboo. As it is, the sex is a little too much, "I did this, and she did that, and it felt great" kind of like describing how you cleaned the house. Make the mother squirt when her daughter brings her off orally, and then be surprised and embarrassed by it. The father could roar "Fuck! Here it comes little girl" as he nuts in her. The sex should be exciting, wild, and well, orgasmic.
Great story , well told and just long enough
Think there is a lot more to cum as this develops
Looking forward to it