All Comments on 'Entice Pt. 02'

Garbage=one star. That's what I thought, but then the sewer rats will think differently. Count on it.

Wow you wasted 5 minutes of your life thinking and then typing out this drivel?

After a few paragraphs I felt that since you felt the world should read this literary bowel movement, that I should point out to you something you obviously avoided while writing it.....and, in case you didnt figure it out, that is that this was a literary bowel movement. Or BM if you prefer, or a dookie, a number 2, also known as a shit, feces, poo poo....need I go on?

Dear Anonymous,

When you call others 'SEWER RATS' that shows and reflects your culture and social up-bringing. I'm not unhappy, but having pity. May God give some piece of mind. Have a nice day. World is not full of sobs... It has smiles too... See the other part... Will be happy to lead a better life!

By the way thanks for your ONE STAR remark. I do need ONE BAD COMMENT with SIX FAVORITES for a story just under ONE DAY of PUBLICATION...

Loved that emphasize how big her ass is. Five stars.

That was a mess. Need an editor. Why would two brothers both be named Robert?

Yes anonymous, sewer rats have standards too. I doubt any of them can be found amongst Sweet’s 6 acolytes. Apologize now sir.

Yes you are right 26th 27th 28th 29th 30th... SEWER RATS DO HAVE STANDARDS TOO! Which I don't see around in civilized society with a mask of so-called pseudo intellectual! Apologies sounds good from people with integrity and credibility... Don't you agree 99thZC?

Shit show

Checking up on old Nothings, and the old boy still hasn’t hit 100 followers.

26thNC... I SEE YOUR COMMENTS ALMOST IN ALL LITEROTICA STORIES!!!

ALL NEGATIVE!!!

EVEN FOR HOT 4.5+***** STORIES!!!

DON'T YOU GET BORED OF ALL THE NEGATIVITY YOU'RE NURTURING???

IF SUCH A GREAT CRITIC, WHY DON'T YOU START WRITING???

LET PEOPLE JUDGE YOU...

BY THE WAY I WAS JUST CHECKING, THIS AUTHOR HAS ABOUT 115 FAVORITES.

NOT BELOW 100.

STOP CRITICISING. YOU'RE MAKING A DONKEY OF YOURSELF.

Continuity is maintained well, what's there in the booty for part lll?