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by HalfAsleep
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Anonymousover 7 years agoUmm....
A really great story... until the strange demon ending jolted the flow of the story and pushed it into the science fiction category. Or nonhuman encounters. Or Mind Control. It just seemed like a quick shift in the flow and then the "and they woke up the next day and it was all a dream" ending. I don't know how to rate it.
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HalfAsleep@HalfAsleepJust writing for the fun of it. * the Dark Horde series is over. It was started on a whim, and it finally came to a close, though I might re-visit it. It seems that there is a lot of possibilities there, with a lot more adventures. But it was written without a structure, an...
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