All Comments on 'Fiadh 04'

Nicely done; yes, wonderfully erotic but could feel the poignancy. Your romantic side is so evident in several of your recent pieces. That and the travel agent hat you enjoy wearing. Have enjoyed almost all of your pieces from the very start.

I think I missed the point of the story. It was more a precis to a broader novel. So much was missed in the descriptions, no depth to the build up, lack of enthusiastic action. Did nothing for me. Minor grammatical errors and lack of proof reading were more exciting as at least they kept your attention. I acknowledge the effort put into any writing but there has to be at least an ending or conclusion.

Thank you for the wonderful feedback it means a lot to me XOXO