- Fetish
- Forty Thousand or Bust
- Page 11
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His words shocked her but caused an immediate sexual twinge deep down inside.
He continued talking as her mind came to terms with this strange new feeling. "You've seen what it does to me."
"Yes." She cut him off.
Staring at his silenced lips, she whispered, "Take these shorts off and tell me exactly what you want from me."
She spoke up as he began to move his hands down towards the buttons at her waist. "Then you're going to have to make that dirty minded cock of yours somehow convince me to go through with whatever you want me to do and prove to me that it will be worth it." As she spoke the tingling feeling grew inside her.
"Oh God." she whispered, leaning her head back onto the bedding as he stripped her of her clothing and lay on top of her with his erection poised between her legs.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoA lot of it was literally horrific everything with Taquan and Dougie’s sister - what a complete and utter evil bitch. In Lucie’s situation at some point I would have have told him what she did. After all he’d want to know why she never wanted to go near his sister ever again. Tbf I completely skipped past the section with Yvonne and Lucie’s second interaction. I don’t have any problems reading about girl on girl a lot of it is very sexy but their interactions were a complete turn off for me.
Even for a fantasy I thought she was incredibly unlikely that she would ever put those chains back on again, that’s just from a trauma standpoint. That said you handled that aspect of it pretty well. I’m all in favour of enjoying your chosen kinks.
Overall I really enjoyed the story and I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing in the future. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Tess (UK)
Anonymousover 3 years agoVery well written except for a few wrong words and minor grammar errors. A decent editor would easily take care of that. Please keep writing.
T.
Anonymousover 3 years agoHoly shit i fucking loved this, now I'm no professional or whatever, but this was really well laid out, and I thoroughly enjoyed this, so thank you, I'm glad I got a chance to read such a phenomenally well written story, thank you for putting your ideas and story out here!
