by Literarylover25
5 stars. Hot and fun. Loved her inner monologue.
The real estate showing scenario has been on my story idea list for a while, but you may have inspired me to move it to the top of the heap and give it a spin.
Thanks!
Very nice. Only observation is it seemed to slip from first to third person in the middle.
Thank you! I'm always having to sneak on writing and, while I do re-read, I'm usually rushed. I'll work on it, that always confuses me!