All Comments on 'Friday Night Showing'

Thank you! I'm always having to sneak on writing and, while I do re-read, I'm usually rushed. I'll work on it, that always confuses me!

Very nice. Only observation is it seemed to slip from first to third person in the middle.

Hot! More stories please!

5 stars. Hot and fun. Loved her inner monologue.

The real estate showing scenario has been on my story idea list for a while, but you may have inspired me to move it to the top of the heap and give it a spin.

Thanks!