All Comments on 'Frustrated Milf Ch. 02'

5 Stars. Would love to read more, please carry on with this story.

Overall good plot idea and nicely done erotic scenes. Though, should have stayed consistent with the neutral POV in the narrative parts; using "I" only in the direct speech parts.

Hope there are more chapters to come. Looks promising, wondering where the plot scenario is leading to. Classic composition calls for another 3 chapters; the climax, a sidetrack interlude with some conflicts and final. Possible themes are struggles and decisions - does she beg and humiliate herself again? Does he call for her again? Does he escalate pressure/mind games? What extreme things will he demand from her? Will she do them? Has she a limits? Does she act to stay within? .... Thanks and all the best

Love it!

This Peggy Wilson has me hooked