by Tiesto1
great story. would be better without the midday booty call. as a married man i wanted to know why ramon let his wife be in charge. seems like she wore the pants. add more back story on the people involved. the husband being a owned bitch would be a hot b story.
Chapter 2 definitely is better than the 1st. I thoroughly enjoyed the last scene.
I struggle with my bisexuality and hearing stories like this make me miss out on the endless possibilities out there.
Stated in this part it was your first time to fuck a man’s ass, but you had done it in part one. Lots of spelling errors and some of your paragraphs were confusing as far as characters go. Maybe get someone to proofread your stories before posting anything else would contribute to better clarity and enjoyment of your work.