All Comments on 'Geek's Big Break Pt. 10'

Fuck, I missed your stories.... Pls don't make us wait thus long for your another stories... ❤️❤️

50🌟Well worth the wait. Now I really can’t wait for the rest of the story and others that you have in the works. Was not expecting Mia to be royalty. Very nice twist. Thank you for continuing your visions for us.

I know English isn;t your first language, but a person who is "dominant" is a Dominant, what they do is dominate.

Also the whole Mia being a Princess thing was a little jarring

Great addition to story, and well worth the wait

Was another great addition to the story. Please continue with more. Love your stories and can't wait to read them as you release them.

Please add more soon I look forward to where you take us with the story.

Great continuation of the story! Love that you are able to publish again. Cock throbbing as I look forward to more

Great addition. Can’t wait for more.

Thank you. I’ve been waiting for you to continue the story. Can’t wait for the next installment.

Good story. I can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 11. Hope to see it soon

Way over the top, even if it is a fun read. Also, long time between chapters means I have to reread too much - LOL! 4*

Thank you VERY much for the episode recap at the very beginning of the story. You saved me from going back to the beginning and being extremely disappointed with this story. There are elements contained within that would have been outside of the genre for me. I'm enjoy brother/sister/first cousin incest and under certain circumstances harem stories too. But the cross generational incest of mother/son and daddy/daughter is nearly always distasteful.

So bottom line, I skipped ahead to enter this comment before signing off. I also abstained from voting since you gave me adequate warning ⚠️ right from the start. Thanks again and I wish you all the best.

Oh this so needs to continue on,, 5⭐️ story ,, needs Mia encounter,, Cheri is a good character,, but Abi is head over heels for her,, she needs to understand that in this family it’s a sharing lifestyle,, she all ready put a collar on her,, without his permission,,, she needs to understand the rules of the lifestyle

Looking forward to seeing what caused the plane to explode.

Great Story. With so many characters, you need to every few chapters add a character list.

Can’t wait for more!!!!

Great chapter yet again but I’m more pleased to hear your still writing power of love and also the next instalment of trophy wives I can’t wait thanks so so much I was fearing the worst when there was no new chapters.

I’m guessing now the plane exploded due to the guy gia wants as prime minister ? .

Great story so far.

Please continue

Great to see you back to this story. Keep going for many more chapters PLEASE!

Man, I sure pray that I do not have to wait almost a year and a half for the next chapter, I need more of this marvelous man named Gio and his fabulous family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay I guess thats enough, oh no its not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please more! I am so loving this story line

Love this series and can’t wait to see how it progresses!!!

Excellent - so far !

But there's still so much more to tell.

The case against the Football Team, Becky and Abi's revenge, the trip to the Island, Cheri, the new company, more profit........so PLEASE don't stop here !

Rapier

Love it!! Vergelijkbare captivating story!!!

We want more!!!

is there going to more of this story? i really hope so i love this story.

I liked the story. A little farfetched in spots. But still a good read. When will you continue it?

More

More please!

Do you know how long it would take to "cruise" on a yacht from Maine to Greece (5000+ miles)? A week to ten days minimum underway. If your characters want to do this over a weekend, they have no other choice but to FLY, and that's assuming they all already have passports.

This story just keeps getting more convoluted and ridiculous as time goes.

The story was good kept getting more and more twists in it. The size of the cock was abit too much but the overall story was good.

Although could use a couple more chapters to inform us the outcome of the investigation and also if Cecile and Fiona got pregnant and the outcome of Gios business

Umm, where is this island exactly? Your description indicated Mia is of Greek heritage. At 10knots ( a common cruising speed for leisure craft) it would take 22 days to reach Greece from Maine. At 25 knots (pushing hard and risking damage even when done for only a few hours), it would take 8.5 days. That's not a weekend trip. So where is the island?

more of this story and characters please

Love this story and I can't wait until you release the next chapter! I Also love Waking Vengeance and I was wondering if you are ever going to release a new chapter for that story too!!

This story has got my hooked keep it up

is there more?

So far so good loved it

Please continue...!!!!👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Just getting really good. All good actually, just a bad spot to leave everyone hangin'.

I dont follow many authors here in fact you are one of five. Your writing is great. Your arch's flow nicely your conflicts are engaging your resolutions are very rewarding your sex scenes are not repetitive. The only thing I've yet to see is a conclusion but your works are serial and not finished for which im glad because I want more. For whatever its worth I rank your work up there with burnedredstone and soul71 atleast in my humble opinion. You are one of the creators who have inspired me to contribute and I thank you fo that keep it up.

Thank you for all your creativity and driving me to be that better Dom. Looking forward to more.

Please continue the story.

I was hoping for more

Please, please continue this story. It cries out for a true ending.

Lovin' this story, hope you're going to give it an ending. To many things left hanging.

Enjoying the story. Can't say I'm crazy about the dog girl thing, but overall a great story.

You can't end this story like this! There is so much more to this story, please write more.

Great story, can't wait to read many more chapters!

Hey man, love the stories so far please keep it going. Is there any update for when the next chapter is coming out?

Getting the feeling that this is all the author intends to give us, most unfortunate.

I would l9ve to see where this story goes. They're so many unanswered character arcs that I need to see come to fruition. GREAT STORY SO FAR, BUT WE NEED MORE!

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May be the greatest 'Geek/Nerd' story on the site (incompleat as it stands) just the right amount of 'ingredients' (although there could have been more detail about the confrontation)...a solid conclusion would solidify it as 'The Best'.

11/10!!!!!

I would love to see more chapters of the marvelous story

kinda sad theres no more

A interesting read.

I would hope that the story would continue with movement to the Island Kingdom, the arrest and the extreme sentences of each and every rapist to include every judge, political hack, booster, coach and even the players themselves who was involved.

And the Chadwick’s become the biggest sissies in prison.

And they all live happily ever after.

Good stroke story

What a superb story thus far with a storyline that could just keep going on.

Well written with a few spelling & grammatical that don't detract from the story or readability.

Would love to see just where the author wants to take us readers in future episodes.

Thanks so far, one of the best stories I've read

I’ve been waiting patiently for the retaliation planned from the football team and coaches so far nothing or have you forgotten your own storyline. Add some action and a little bit of blood and guts to liven up the story a bit. They can’t walk away scot-free for what they’ve done.

Never got the whole puppy sex concept...

I hope we get more of the puppy training. It's quite hot.... also hope the football team gets in trouble.

for some reason chapter 9 isn't here. I'd like to see him get revenge on his dad by taking his secretary away from him for starters. like to see how many of the cheerleaders he finally gets into and what happens to all the guys involved. like to see what goes on with Cherry's grand daughter and see if he ever gets the other two women at school

YOU ALSO NEED TO GIVE MORE OF WHAT GOES ON WITH MIA. YOU'VE LEFT ALOT OF AREAS WIDE OPEN ANOTHER ONE IS IF THE SHERIFF'S DAUGHTER GETS HER SOME OF THE GEEK

I have read this story a few times and imo it is one of the best stories on literotica, rivaling the best stories. One issue that I have is with Becky/Precious and just how impossible it will be for her to live the life of a family fuck pet. It is one thing to do this at home but she has a powerful position in the company being the head of the legal department. It seems to me that she will be viewed as a joke of an attorney if she really wears a dog like costume so to speak. The tail and her going to shit outside is pretty crazy.

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