All Comments on 'Grace Kim in the Blackedverse Pt. 04'

Very nice! Hope to see a continuation soon!

good story! i hope it goes forward... if you accept an advice maybe it d be great a bit of backstory for new characters because when you introduce a lot of new name it can get confusing!

also it can help a bit of visual telling like telling a story describing what she s wearing or her kind of hair with the name of a character to better identify them