All Comments on 'Happy Anniversary in Vegas Pt. 02'

So the big pussy of a husband gets to keep a cheating skank. That doesn’t sound like a win to me.

Stupid twist that's really no reason for anything to be changed. She still is who she is. She still was unfaithful, intentionally. She still lied, intentionally.

And it was the stereotypical claiming to have said things that she supposedly didn't really mean that was really pathetic. That's not how it works. Like the old saying, "Out of the abundance of the heart, the mouth speaks." Under stress, what she really felt bubbled to the top and then she tried to cover it up and deny it and lie.

I don't buy the home-grown therapy. She cheated and humiliated her husband, drunk or not, and if he lost desire for her because of it, then maybe he would be right to divorce her. When it's an expected result of epic humiliating betrayal, no therapy or counseling, professional or no, would really make it right. Just convenient. Why medicalize what is basically an emotional reaction? Forgive perhaps, but continue living in a loveless marriage? What a stupid notion. The guy felt emasculated by his mate, so time to move on, find someone else to 'get it up with' if still important. She simply didn't have his back, so continue her AA program, learn a lesson from the resulting divorce, and be a better mate next time around. Same for him. His equipment would thank him going forward.

Why all the created anxiety by putting off the obvious. The wife cheated on THEIR anniversary with an old flame. Pretty much case closed. She expressed what she thought of their marriage. He (or "they" if that description still counted) should have divorced her and moved on. There is no trust in that situation and for her to threaten to 'step out' because he doesn't feel the same desire for her pretty much says it all.

Another weak cuck of a husband character. You'd have to be closeted to write a male this way.

Husband doesn't make any sense. I think wife did the right thing to cheat on him. Not sorry for him at all, he sounds like a moron

3starrs

The MC came back from Vegas early, she waited out the planned trip before returning, and he didn't change the locks, etc. ???

I guess Wreck was right: desperate or gutless.

Эмоционально.мысли раба,мораль раба, оправдание раба.жаль раба

Only 10k, that's it? WTF. That's peanuts.

How he can even stand to look at her is frankly amazing.

Also, I was a little surprised that he wouldn't recognize a novelty lighter.

The husband clearly had a depressive disorder of some type. Weird that it didn't translate into disgust at his wife given her transparent attempts at initiating intimacy. All the while, she never really showed any contrition. Just a start fucking me again or I will leave you threat. He should have sought psychiatric assistance to get on an even keel, followed by an attorney for divorce, even despite their being children involved. If revenge were that important, he would fuck her friend Jana and STILL divorce the wife. This wife clearly wasn't worth reconciliation and he was just too depressed to reason it out.

In my Commonwealth cousins' parlance, this wife was a "right cunt". Kept reading, looking for some signs of contrition, but it simply wasn't really there. Just 'I'm going to leave this marriage if you don't start fucking me again.' That, after her thrice enjoyed transgression? What a cunt. He should have thrown the big D at her, gone for custody, got away, sought help, and worked on finding someone who valued fidelity. Fact is, someone who lacks sexual fidelity probably lacks fidelity in other areas of judgement and trust too. This was a true 'dump the bitch' scenario and he was just too depressed to exercise it.

Her husband doesn’t eat pussy? Don’t give a shit if she cheated now

Turning it into the epitome of a juvenile male fantasy was inevitable considering that from the start of part two they were still together a couple of months after Vegas. If the immediate aftermath did not result in divorce and the author wanted to throw a bone to the hapless hubby then the aforementioned juvenile threesome was the only way out.

This dude is just a wimp... She cheated on him counciously three times!! And the 3rd time he saw first hand what she did and said... And yet, he chose to keep her? What garbage this is... I dont get why someone would let this disrespect happen and still be with her... I would just live... She didnt repent she cheated... She just regret he cought her...

Still bullshit.

I enjoyed it, better ending than part 1 and what the fuck, it’s just sex get over it all you losers who think he’s a wimp, it’s much harder to stay and kids need two parents. People need to work things out, there’s more than one way to live your life

This guy is mentally challenged. She cheats on him twice and then takes her back? What happens the next time she is out of town?

What utter garbage this ending is.

I'm not saying revenge sex can't fix things in some circumstances, it's possible that it can. Sometimes. Uncommonly. Rarely.

Whatever this was, it fixed absolutely nothing. Not his humiliation, not the image of his wife being fucked, not that she cheated however many times, etc.

And 10000 for such humiliation? What an unbelievable wimp. Physical violence no matter the consequence is the only option for such humiliation.

Ridiculous !

Bullshit

I thought there was nothing worse than a story with an ambiguous ending and then I read this sequel... Terrible because "magic sex" fixed everything.

Just more garbage.

I see my earlier comments weren't posted as I gave this story 1 star. I've raised it to 2; perhaps if I didn't post the lowest rating, my comment would've been posted. Anyway: I liked the story until it came to the 3some/ lesbi sex. I doubt in reality anything like that would work. And Jana's helping Alex even though she's not speaking to her?

In Alex & Mike's talk, she asks if he hates her. His response: ... I hate that didn't do more. Who?? Him? Alex?

At the dance club, why did Mike just sit there waiting while Wreck's all over his wife? Is he a subconscious wimp? She totally ignored Mike for Wreck, why? It's supposed to be their 10th anniversary!

Never explored: Alex's saying their love life's boring. Why didn't she talk to her husband-- or even try doing something different with him? Alex talking to Jana: she asked Mike to do SOMETHING with her but he refused. NO! She said she's going shopping; he didn't want to go for some alone time. Nothing else/ no possible alternatives were given. If she wanted to be with him that badly.... And that's after she met Wreck during the night when he's sleeping, As it winds up, it's doubtful she DID go shopping but went to Wreck, & he's the one she's texting early in the morning.

Lastly, why did Alex not believe Mike when he told her of his finger smell? Of course, she's guilty allowing him fingered her. But she didn't believe Mike until the scumbag confirmed it. Ordinarily, I'd ask why she didn't file a police complaint/ get her blood tested for the drugs? Of course, before hand, she willingly took them... a few times. So she got what she must've wanted, but couldn't admit it to Mike.

Overall, I liked the story, but between the unexplored things I brought up & the sex @ Jana's house, I'm giving this a 2 star. Disappointed! -- Bob

This was sooo disappointing as to be nearing bullshit. I'm sorry I read it. Mike grabs the gun of one of the bodyguards & it's a lighter? Working things out spotlights a lesbian relationship between Alex & her friend that leads to 3 some sex? It's like the author wanted to sex up the story, which wasn't needed. Or wanted. All that's needed - & it could include Alex going to AA - is the continuing story of Alex & Mike - divorce, separation, or continuing with the marriage. Again, the story turned to shit with the introduction of different parties & Alex's lesbian encounter. 1 star

Trash

For continuation of the subject matter at hand, totally disappointing. Alex & Hubby's supposed to be working on their marriage, but the intro of lesbian sex between her & Jana is sooo out of place.

Just another closet cuck

Lost me when it got weird with the intro of lesbian sex, no matter how slight. He doesn't want revenge sex but has it anyway with his wife tied down. Interesting in the beginning but, as stated, lost me towards the end. All this is supposed to help the husband & marriage... how?

Good fiction but could have been more interesting. A more plausible story where the wife presses charges, gets tested for date-rape drugs, and confronts circumstances in a court would be more interesting. The struggle of recovering the marriage, and showing remorse through a psychiatrist and counseling would have been more engrossing to me.

Well written, but thank God it's fiction. Some holes though. If she had been drugged, there would be physical evidence which would show up in blood work when she pressed allegations. I doubt the defendants rapper status would help him over drug-rape charges. Then there is illegal apprehension by the bodyguards, for which charges could be used to coerce depositions to avoid criminal charges. The real Wreck character would be in a pile of "sh*t". For the wife, if drug testing showed date-rape drugs, admitting a problem, showing remorse, and at seeing a shrink and/or counselor would be in order to save a marriage. That would have been more interesting than the MFF threesome angle. The ending was very weak and too implausible.

Very good writing - good effort by the author. Some comments are ridiculous - this is a story. Your asinine comments are beyond belief

Ten thousand for a probable marriage ending, life altering trauma? What a cheap ass wimp he is.

If you want loving wives skup that one! Just another cheap cuck story!

Not quite a WACC... but close. DJ Wreck would have his goons hands smashed with a sledge hammer and Dreck would be found in a dark alley with his balls smashed with the same sledge hammer and hit dick cut off.

I agree with all the other reviews. Unless they are gay, no male is going to take the name "Hotprof". I have absolutely NOTHING against gay men, my dad always told me that the more gay men around the better it was for straight guys, because it cuts down on the competition for the straight females AND, they also can give you excellent fashion advice. That being said, I don't know any man who would not be angry and want his pound of flesh, unless they are into being a cuckold. No class rapper boy would have a run in with something bad in a dark alley, and his two goons would, at the very least, be knee-capped. Story sucks anyway, so some good old gratuitous violence wouldn't hurt it any.

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Based on this author's body of work, I believe the biography listed is a lie. This author is female. What male would get a handle of hot prof? This author has no clue about how men think. This story was just complete crap. He is forced to watch her cheat and he takes no action, no anger, nothing but acceptance. This writer is clueless and she has no idea how thing actually work. The ending was just ridiculous and a complete waste of time. I hope she stops writing as she is building up a huge tally of negative comments to her pathetic stories.

Now that's we call a "REALISTIC STORY". I'm sure ReedsRichards must have loved it. No crime, no drama, no ott punishment ( that's such a middle age thing) for the cheaters, just Alex blaming it all on drinking and drugs and getting away with it and Mike sucking it up like a real "HUBBY BITCH"( Deck the Wreck was surely a mage!) I wish there was a third part of this story in which Alex killed Mike with a knife and told him as he lay dying:" Gee honey I'm so sorry it was just one time I won't do it again! Now please forgive or I shall leave you for good!"

... out your ass. No anger? No humiliation? No pain or tears or remorse for marrying a stupid cunt slut whore?!? That's not a man/husband - that's a psycho dog. And he still stays married to that big of a gash/whore???

He deserves everything he gets - including continued castration, an every-day-cheating, trailer trash, gutter slash two-bit whore. Useless superating cunt and a shit for brains, docile, castrated "hubby". The whole thing is just plain sickening.

Too bad you also just had to drag Vegas' good name through this muck.

Part 2 was just crap💩

Why do Alex return from Las Vegas four days behind Mike? Have she been continuing her honeymoon with her rap dancer? There can't be any other explanation, if she's genuinely concerned about her family she should immediately follow him back. And Mike, even if he wants to stay married for the children he should at least start sleeping in a separate room, and carry his things there to at least show her he don't approve her tryst at the minimum!

Terrible

Didn’t think you would do it but you made the second part much worse than the first. You take a guy with morals and self respect and turn him into another perverted and pathetic cuck. No real man stays with what is obviously a slut. Wifey will continue to cheat and he is now just another foolish and idiotic one dick wonder. Ridiculous

Part 1 was ok, part 2 was dreadful.

You have many stories in my favorites, but if there was a trash bin for stories that I hate, this one would be there.

I hope that you get cancer and fucking die!

DJ Wreck got his comeuppance.

One of Alex's brothers was a Marine as were 2 of her cousins. They were Force Reccon and were mean motherfuckers.

Well her brother and cousins got pissed off when I told them why Alex and I broke up. They arranged for a few more of their buddies to be in Vegas when we all went there.

The reccon part of Force Reccon was helped by ex-marines and we soon found out where fuckhead and his cronies were living.

We went over to DJ Wrecks house and when he answered my knock on the door he had a smirk on his face and said "Oh it's the cuckhold".

His smirk disappeared when he saw Alex's brother and the rest of the crew.

I introduced the fuckhead to Alex's brother and the rest of the crew and said I would let them sort out the mess DJ Wreck and his boys had caused.

An hour later there were 3 very unhappy people. Knees shattered. Hands destroyed. Jaws broken. Ribs broken. And in the case of DJ Wreck his testicles totally destroyed and his penis was mangled.

When I returned home Alex asked me what I had been doing for the last few days. I answered cleaning up the mess.

When she read about DJ Wreck she knew exactly what I was talking about.

First chapter started out pretty good but this 2nd chapter just fizzes out⭐️⭐️

This guy seriously? I would have made jana pregnant in front of her but no that wouldn't happen because we would have been dirvoced by then

Shoulda just left it alone.

Making the gun a fake was cheap.

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She's not happy with their sex life? What has SHE done to shake things up?

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She deliberately did Molly? It's not like he slipped her the drug.

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I notice that Alex didn't tell Jana WHY Mike wanted nothing to do with her - because DJ Wreck had fingered her, and she lashed out and Mike when he accused her of allowing it.

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Can't pull her panties down very far with her legs tied spread out. Need to cut them off.

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I'd like the threesome if it was forced by him, not the "ladies" idea. I would have included Alex eating the cream pie out of Jana as well.

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The fact that she was trying to fuck him not knowing if she had an STD or not would be a strike against her.

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Guy was a wimp.

The first part was bad. This part was worse. I couldn't finish it. One star.

That was a good ending. What happens in Vegas really stays in Vegas

You are already in the flow in part one but you suddenly disconnect. You introduce new character with little relevance to the last story. Usually, the reaction of the guy will be different. I understand this is fantasy but this fantasy isn't good enough to suspend my disbelief.

Pretty lame. She hooks up with a football star fantasy after she blows off her husband. She's too jet lagged to fool around with hubby, which is why they were there in the first place, but gets all juiced up on X with the hasbeen. She leaves hubby in the room and does the has been turned wannabe dj four times. Why he didn't dump her is beyond comprehension. Even the plot to get him interested in her again is transparent.

Dog has a point, at least in this story

Not your best work . I would have Taken a Baseball Bat to Dwreck and His friends . Then I might have crippled the big guy ..

because clearly you aren't one

Sad CUCK/RAAC story...

That was disappointing.

Hotprof1973 chose to have Mike prove to be the timid wimp Alex and Deck assumed he was in Las Vegas. That was a disappointing decision in my opinion. There is no character to admire and root for here. Why should they or we respect him when he does not respect himself? This Mike would have accepted Alex giving birth to Deck's child and would have meekly begun changing diapers and contributing money to a college fund. Sheesh...

The story fell flat for me when I realized I no longer cared what their future held. That is a pity. This could have been much more.

2*

We go from Mike-the-Man who pulls a gun against 3-1 odds, to Mike-the-wimp who can't either get it up or move his ass out. Not to mention the fantasy level probability of a hired goon packing a fake pistol. Somehow, in chapter two a fuck fest with Jana fixes everything...

The foundational fantasy is Suzy-Homemaker popping pills and doing a handstand on the dance floor in chapter one (Martian Slut Ray?). She continues shitting on her hubby multiple times with Dick Weak and finally reacts when hubby is discovered in the closet. Okay, it's HotProf's story, oops, sorry, HotProf's fantasy. Very well written, weak basic premise and plot. Many thanks for the effort!

Keep 'em comin'.

Your female characters have no morals and all need to be shot. Your male characters are either pieces of shit or impotent cucks... who need to be shot.

The story was very weak. She is claiming that she loves him....but basically gives him an ultimatum....'I cheated.....I love you.....Buti if you don't fuck me I am leaving you'. WTF? That is not love. She should have waited for him to get over it sexually as long as it takes him. Be with him without sex for the rest of her life if need be. That would show some dedication...some love. And the threesome. That also happened the way SHE wanted. She did not REALLY suffer at all. She basically got away with it. 2*...For the effort.

Nothing remotely believable, unique or intersting.

a 2*

Stupid story, waste of time reading.

Anonymous 02/12/20.

However I would also like to read a version where Deck is realy shot but not deadly. How he would have to explain the drugs in the wifes body and the accused rape.

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You must be some piece of cuckold pussy to write a story like this. I would have had her shit packed and on the front porch by the time she got back from Vegas.

What a crap story. -50 stars.

Same old story, their sex life is routine, but she never says anything or does anything to spice it up for BOTH of them.

She's responsible for his impotence, but if he can't get it up, the marriage is over? Fine, end it.

twice durring their marriage

And her punishment is to have sex again with the first person she cheated on him with?

cucks get 1 star

Reports just in are that B Grade rapper DJ Wreck has been found in his Las Vegas room and taken to hospital in a critical condition. We will bring you further updates as they come in

Update one

Hospital sources state that DJ Wreck is out of surgery and recovering after being found in his Las Vegas room earlier today. Reports are still sketchy but it is believed that he was beaten severely by persons unknown.

Further update

Further information on the DJ Wreck beating. Doctors have been unable to save his penis or testicles. Police also report that his 2 bodyguards were found bound and gagged in his room and both had been tortured and beaten severely. Police have no suspects but would like to talk with 4 men seen earlier today entering DJ Wrecks room while he was out on the town.

As I got off the plane from Las Vegas with my 3 friends my wife Alex was waiting for me with a very nervous expression on her face. As she came into my arms for a hug I whispered to her. "That is what will happen to any man you decide to have an affair with in the future." "Now lets go home and put this behind us once and for all."

Either himself or hires it done. This author is a Cuck of the First Order and should probably take his own life.

What in the world is wrong with Mike. A man would leave her in a heartbeat, the slut.

What a Mess and they all seem happy . If Wrecks buddy's had stopped Me from Him Raping My Wife .. I would be serving time by now . I would have paid back Wreck and all of his friends ..

3 need to be in jail forced him to watch being cuckolded

Did before do again?

No wonder our society is shit

Where is moral fiber to stand up for what is right damn the kids finding out mom is a slut someone will figure out her sometime down the road and post it

Tell kids now so don't get blind sided

He is wimp

Weak ass pussyman story I’m wafer the gusto reek havoc and nothing. Where is the 0 star button?

First Part was okay, The snd Turned out to be cuck shit.

He should dump her or he is a wimp

Nothing worth seeing here. She was a cruel, insensitive bitch, but they’re back together now, so everything is okay. None of these characters strike me as worthwhile people. There is nobody here to root for.

Me, if the "Wreck" had text me that my wife was with him(after what he did in the dance floor with her) I'd of packed my suitcase and disappeared. Never contacting her or anyone from my past ever again.

He got tied down and forced to watch his wife have sex. He got the rapper's cum all over his face. The video of his whore wife is up on the internet for everyone to see. She already cheated on him before, but it's okay because it was a woman.

Now it's all okay!

This has got to be up there with one of the worst stories ever. I can't even...

Lol at whoever said making the rapper white ruined the story for a lot of people.

Seem to be a common theme in your stories. Take away the wife's inhibitions so she can hurt her husband and he can forgive, because there was drugs on board. The problem I'm having is that the wife in this story decided to disrespect the husband before she even took the drugs. Alcohol is not a good enough excuse for her behavior unless she had a chemical imbalance. So, I'm having a hard time reconciling this reunion.

On the other hand, aside from a few tense and gramatical errors you did a good job. A writer's job is to illicit emotion and this couple's actions kind of pissed me off so good job.

You’ve painted the picture so well and so detailed that it will stick in my mind forever. I would love to see the continuation of this threesome that would include the problems that will inevitably develop in any relationship and how they are solved.

I believe this is a masterpiece of porn and relationship literature.

Thank you for creating this delicious read for me (and us).

I think it is very real that the thought of him and DJ Wreck makes him sick and suffer ED but why in gods name is he still married to the slut? She is a horrible person who can't keep her legs together for any reason as demonstrated by the lesbian affair as well. He saying a sexless marriage is out of the question and setting a time limit shows what is more important to her - SEX over LOVE.

You riled us up so I guess it is a good job on your part.

She shouldn't fuck about then.

It seems astonishing to me that after everything anyone in her position would dare to say something like that, especially as she is living in fear of divorce papers being delivered. And after all her whining about intimacy, she didn't know she was clean until the last day in the story, instant droop. The bitch was more interested in getting a cock in her than infecting her husband.

As for the pay off, $10k for a wrecked marriage? 2 more zeros and maybe it would be worth accepting, especially given the compensation society that is the US. And let her cry drugs, it wasn't her fault, because that got her a free pass as it was written.

Wife was not a likable character and a disgusting spouse. Hence the low score. But still an interesting tale.

I didn't care for the ending of the first chapter. He needed to go after the asshat and expose him. But in this chapter you seem to think that banging his wife's friend will change his mind about a divorce. Thinking with the "little head" maybe? That seemed wrong and like a reversal of his attitude. I simply can't believe he doesn't take action against his wife and her lover. Not good.

While you think that Alex might cheat again your story "Beth's Birthday Pass" is much less believable with that wife still communicating with her extended weekend lover Jack. These stories take a life of their own and while you might hate the jerk off football player in this story he was no worst than your Navy Seal that took a married wife because he could seduce her all too easily and he did. I gave this story a 5* rating while your story was as well as or better written it got a 1* because of "believability".

Your ending for part one worked for a lot of readers and was great as is. This seems like a rushed reaction to the negative comments. Too many trolls on here. You'll never keep them all happy, just do your thing. Writing and dialogue was good, the plot just was too rushed and easy. Sex scene wasn't bad - recycle that concept in a new story

for reading an LW story rated below 4. My fault.

the first story I thought had some originality and potential. This ending was one whiskey tango foxtrot after another. Being in a good mood I gave the other story a four. You had a shot but this was a hodge podge. I was over generous on the first story.

but it's not at all.

plenty of women will cry and moan about 'being sorry', but they aren't. they want what they want. and when they 'are sorry', what they want is usually a chance to confess, and be absolved. they rarely want what is best for the person they have wronged. selfish and entitled. part DNA, and part culture.

wife should have promised to wait, 'as long as it takes'. her love was conditional at the start, so she cheated easily. her love is still conditional even after. promises mean nothing to her. the 'friend' is in it for pleasure too. she'd probably make a better wife, but only slightly. ever so slightly. women rarely care about sharing physical intimacy. why would they? they are the gatekeepers of sex. they can easily get it. men have to work for it, it's why they get labeled studs if they succeed. it's harder for them, much harder. polls prove that women prefer to date up by a large factor, they all want the top 20% of men. BUT men are the gatekeepers of relationships, that's where you make a woman insecure. Have the wife agree to him taking a second wife perhaps. A younger one to boot. Watch how quickly that 'contented smile' disappears.

men don't use their power. it's truly a sad state of affairs. men don't want relationships, they can EASILY get one. No one wants to pay for a roomate that bitches and moans, cries at odd times, talks in emotions, threatens to hit you once a month, asks you to do more things than you feel like, takes away time from your buddies, and so forth. that's what men GIVE women....relationships.

I rated that I liked this story but that’s mainly to acknowledge the writing. I disliked many aspects. First she will cheat again, how could he ever trust her. Second how could he even look himself in the mirror taking her back. Third she’s not really sorry, just that she was caught. And she hid taking drugs too.

You had an awesome opportunity to write a Panty Scorching part 2 to a very weak part 1 story but I'm not sure what you did. Whatever it was, it was about as erotic as two old fat beagles trying to fuck.

Literotica emasculation happy cuckold pretensions

The husband to actually save this after hes been throughly humb...after he was tortured and emasculate... This is just vile

"I don't know. I just know if you ever cheat on me again with another man, I will leave you."

could give this more than one star. Given the behavior of the wife in Vegas and after, no sane man would reconcile with the cunt. The addition of Jana fails as a plot device. This is just incredible dreck.