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Click hereShe looked odd, then as she thought it through, she saw the massive invitation I was giving her. "Oh gosh Tim, do you mean?"
I held out my arms. "You are already booked here tonight and tomorrow night. So, do you think this same first date can last through New Year's?"
She looked at me shaking before she said quietly, "Yes definitively. Yes; New Year's 2123, at least."
Epilog: Fifty Weeks Later
Tim
Yes, Brenda and Andy were married. No, I didn't go. My girl, the true one, cried and made love to me all that week. She was scared I still mourned Brenda and may feel unloved.
Yes, there was a bit of jealousy and even fear in her expression that I had loved Brenda more than her. Yet Miss put all her misgivings to the side to concentrate on me. She loves me.
Miss did that for me knowing I may be thinking of the gal I lost. I was going to tell her that she had left Brenda in the dust well before then, but that display of emotion for me on her face practically made me forget I ever had loved Brenda.
Nothing will ever quite do that. Don't worry, Brenda has no sway over me, I have already said it. It's simply history I can't erase, and it was important to my future happiness, so I never want to erase it. What I felt once happened, it was no mistake. Though I carry no baggage and my girl is the only one I carry in my heart.
Hers was an act of love deeper than Brenda ever gave me. I'm going to tell her that on Christmas Eve; that should clear the floor for my proposal on Christmas. No, it's not double dipping; with us the special occasion on Christmas is not tacky. Think of our history, and the first time we ever made love. And I will give her the option; does she want to give me her ass on New Year's, or does she prefer to wait for our honeymoon?
It turns out my forever girl's name is Christina, a perfect name for a Christmas gift, don't you think? Especially as that was the day she told me her name, not ten minutes after I wrapped her in my arms that morning a year ago. I swept her up and took her to our bed. She stopped me right before I made her my own and told me the name of the girl I was claiming.
As far as that Christmas day, I certainly had fun unwrapping her, although playing with her afterwards was even better. Better yet, unlike my previous fiancé, Christina not only has no qualms about marrying me; she can't wait. And she won't have to very much longer.
You see, quite unexpectedly a year ago, after months in a barren desert, I miraculously found myself home for the holidays.
Merry Christmas and to all a good night.
- COMMENTS
Bham4875 months agoThis sounds like a story from an old writer that used to be one here. Matt something. In almost all his stories the main guy got shit on over and over by supposedly “loved ones”
Anonymous5 months agoI don't mind the "no karma" for Brenda and Andy. That is almost certain to arrive. Their marriage is built on shaky foundations. Wait until life's travails come for their marriage. They act on base impulses, have terrible guilt, and have a poor trust foundation.
What bothered me was that his new love, that left Brenda in the dust was somehow swayed (along with Jill) by phone conversations with his ex best friend and ex fiancee. That was annoying and unnecessary. They are pretty much pond scum. Leave them as such. Trying to give them more facets in a shirt story like this is kind of wasted. Their betrayal was really bad. Their actions afterwards were downright sinful. Their destruction of his life nigh complete. They were like two hurricanes that met and destroyed his home and city. They are not forces for good.
Did enjoy Christina. Though her rationale to start as an escort was mind boggling.
Anonymous5 months agoGreat storey! I found the comments almost as interesting. I understand the thirst for some sort of justice, but you set the MC out at the very beginning as a peacemaker not a macho type. OK, I have never met his like in real life, but he is certainly a character I can respect. The real life part comes accross with the other characters - people who do not regard themselves as bad, but are fully capable of cocking it up to the point where they seem so.
The premis that he went out to buy dinner and came back to find the 2 people most important in his life have left him was a little constructed, but necessary for the rest of the storey. I also thought that Christina's reason for loining the escort agency a little thin. But the interplay between the 2 women and the MC during that Christmas was superbly done. The MC's progression out of his mental state was also nicely done, with each stage requireing the previous state and paving the way for the next.
Even with the above comments, I have to give you a well deserved 5 stars. I really enjoyed it, and will certainly be reading it again. Thankyou for the time and effort you and others put into these stories.
Anonymous6 months agoI hated the attempt to humanize the exes by giving them credit for his new relationship.
