All Comments on 'Helen's Story Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent!

That was fantastic! I'm a big fan of forced BJs and even more of a fan of guys blowing their load into the bitches mouth. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Stop the madness

Stop writing from a female's perspective. Are you a female writer? Non-consent is great but your version is about as arousing as cold stone. Where are the emotions? Where are the sensations? More detail is needed in a big way!

I read both your chapters hoping the second one would be better. Better luck, next time.

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