All Comments on 'Hellie and the Pool Party, Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love the story! Breed her and knock her up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Bring back the other daddy from the car, the way he spoke to her was incredible and how they kissed and let their tongues run wild. He needs to have a full night alone with her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Definitely looking forward to the next part.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterabout 1 year ago

Good slut. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

She's starting to loose her personality. Is that on purpose? It was nice to see glimmers of her non fuck doll self. Can you sprinkle some of those elements back in?

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