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by ClubSpade

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ag2507ag25079 months ago

The trouble with cliff hanhers is you have to know where to hang the cliff: this wasn't it. Also in order to hang on, the reader needs to empathise with the protagonist: there is nothing here to empathise with so there is nothing for my screamingly painfull fingers to hang on to. I am figuratively lying broken and bloody at the bottom of your cliff.

tonydxxtonydxx9 months ago

Another sickening episode of mindless violence, which for some reason is classified as Romance. I shall avoid reading any more stories by ClubSpade.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This was a good start!!

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy9 months ago

Not sure about this one!

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

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Hello, Thanks for stopping by, my books go as followed: The Italian Hounds Series - |Precious. |Soul. |Serenity. He Gets What he Wants - |His Little Mate. |His Beloved. |His Treasure. |His Sweetness. The Prophesised. |The Prophesised Angur of Angels. My works are a...

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