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10 Big Blazing Stars for Zeb for a very interesting story. Our MC an interesting guy that is married to a hot sex goddess slut wife. And he lets his Hot Wife have sex with other women, just NOT other men. She thought it would turn him on, because of what her slutty GF told her. LOL I guess it was a 50/50 shot! Ha I liked this story, I liked how the Hubby took control and spanked his wife. I have done that myself. LOL However, Sluts are always going to be sluts, regardless of the consequences, the spanking or the threat of being thrown out in the street. Young sluts have NO FEAR they Know that they can always find a new man to take care of them. 30 yr old sluts realize they don't have that much time left to fuck around, that they better grab a chair in the game of Musical chairs for husbands while they can. LOL Great Effort by Zeb, I liked the story. However, I would have punished the wife with at least nipple rings of my choice and maybe a tattoo or two in addition to the spanking. Otherwise, can't really argue with perfection. Truthfully, I might have had her in a gang bang. LOL but she would have liked it. I made that mistake when I was a biker, leaving my old lady to pull a train when she pissed me off. Buster2U

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As a STORY, let's remember that, its not bad, but muddled in how the MC acted but not a bad one.

Sorry Zeb, you lost me when the bastard she was cheating with left the house under his own power. I stayed with it until the last page and it was ruined completely.

Rbloch66 said my peace... I have read a few stories and mostly had to soon through them. Sorry I'm out. They do feel like a mix of early teenage fantasy and men who just have no respect for women. The woman in this story makes no sense. So much supposed live for him in the entire story except the beginning where she literally tells her liver not to stop just to fuck her in front of her husband because he's a wimp. That's scene doesn't fit with anything else she did in the story.... Well to be fair it may have because I skipped at the middle of the second page so maybe not a fair statement.

I'm out... it kudos for sharing your work, which some others clearly enjoy... Just not for me thank you.

Thanks for your writing.

You got 5 Stars from me. This was an Excellent example of the power love can have on us. Tony loves her and partly forgave her but is reluctant to forget. There are still questions about why, where and when that she convinced herself to cheat. Sandy wasn’t paying attention to his answer when she proposed it previously. He knew how beautiful Sandy is and some of the punishment was to embarrass her and let her see how attractive she is. This was one of the best “Forgive the Bitch” stories that I’ve read. Thank You!!!

I've only read a few of your stories and for the most part, I've enjoyed them. I say read them, but I have an app that reads them to me. In the spirit of positive criticism, I think you need to expand your pronoun use a bit. When your stories are read there are a lot of "I"s. I this, I that. I, I, I. That's what it sounds like. Try using different ways to describe your character's actions and use less "I"s.

Thanks for submitting your work.

Good story but need more burn.

Excellent story. A fun read. Very erotic. 5stars

Excellent writing, very entertaining.

Unfortunately, story didn't make sense 😕.

I have been alive more than six decades. I couldn't take this story seriously.

This couple actually behave like twenty year olds. Failure by husband to help wife with repressed experiences and emotional trauma...Communication...Anyway

Zeb_Carter thank you for the effort.

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AMerryman

The one issue that the MC never got an answer about was why his wife looked dead in his face called him a wimp, then told numbnuts to fuck her in front of him. Where did that disrespect come from? The rest of the story she portends to be really in love with him. So why the wimp/Cuck play? That would a been my main issue along with the lying and whoring but more so why doesn't my wife of 12 years freaking know me?

Another good story from Mr. Carter. Keep on writing and Thank You.

@sbrooks103x

"I talked to you about it last month. You didn't say anything." - I'd like to hear his response to that. Just what DID they talk about? - His response was right after she said, "I talked to you about it last month....."

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"you just shook your head" - Shaking your head means no, and in this context could also mean, "Is she fucking crazy?" - "could also mean"? Could is a big word the way you used it. I see it to be nothing but speculation on your part.

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I know it's an old complaint, but why do they always say, "It was just sex?" What else is cheating? Would they accept that from their husbands? - No of course they wouldn't accept it, it's just a way of trying to minimize the cheating.

Zeb,

This is an absolute grand slam home run over the roof of the old Tiger Stadium. You have shown us a delightful tale of fuck up, penance, purgatory, and punishment all rolled into one. Snappy writing. Honest dialogue weaved throughout the whackiest neighborhood of neurotic nymphos any red blooded male would die to settle in. I applaud you, sir. I love it. Hell of a sight better than anything I could ever do. A 5 Star effort to be sure.

Many thanks!

All the best,

Dave

It was well written, but I just don’t get Tony, story was all over the place. WTF catches his wife cheating and makes her do stupid stuff? Is Tony 14?