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10 Big Blazing Stars for Zeb for a very interesting story. Our MC an interesting guy that is married to a hot sex goddess slut wife. And he lets his Hot Wife have sex with other women, just NOT other men. She thought it would turn him on, because of what her slutty GF told her. LOL I guess it was a 50/50 shot! Ha I liked this story, I liked how the Hubby took control and spanked his wife. I have done that myself. LOL However, Sluts are always going to be sluts, regardless of the consequences, the spanking or the threat of being thrown out in the street. Young sluts have NO FEAR they Know that they can always find a new man to take care of them. 30 yr old sluts realize they don't have that much time left to fuck around, that they better grab a chair in the game of Musical chairs for husbands while they can. LOL Great Effort by Zeb, I liked the story. However, I would have punished the wife with at least nipple rings of my choice and maybe a tattoo or two in addition to the spanking. Otherwise, can't really argue with perfection. Truthfully, I might have had her in a gang bang. LOL but she would have liked it. I made that mistake when I was a biker, leaving my old lady to pull a train when she pissed me off. Buster2U

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As a STORY, let's remember that, its not bad, but muddled in how the MC acted but not a bad one.

Sorry Zeb, you lost me when the bastard she was cheating with left the house under his own power. I stayed with it until the last page and it was ruined completely.

Rbloch66 said my peace... I have read a few stories and mostly had to soon through them. Sorry I'm out. They do feel like a mix of early teenage fantasy and men who just have no respect for women. The woman in this story makes no sense. So much supposed live for him in the entire story except the beginning where she literally tells her liver not to stop just to fuck her in front of her husband because he's a wimp. That's scene doesn't fit with anything else she did in the story.... Well to be fair it may have because I skipped at the middle of the second page so maybe not a fair statement.

I'm out... it kudos for sharing your work, which some others clearly enjoy... Just not for me thank you.

Thanks for your writing.

You got 5 Stars from me. This was an Excellent example of the power love can have on us. Tony loves her and partly forgave her but is reluctant to forget. There are still questions about why, where and when that she convinced herself to cheat. Sandy wasn’t paying attention to his answer when she proposed it previously. He knew how beautiful Sandy is and some of the punishment was to embarrass her and let her see how attractive she is. This was one of the best “Forgive the Bitch” stories that I’ve read. Thank You!!!

I've only read a few of your stories and for the most part, I've enjoyed them. I say read them, but I have an app that reads them to me. In the spirit of positive criticism, I think you need to expand your pronoun use a bit. When your stories are read there are a lot of "I"s. I this, I that. I, I, I. That's what it sounds like. Try using different ways to describe your character's actions and use less "I"s.

Thanks for submitting your work.

Good story but need more burn.

Excellent story. A fun read. Very erotic. 5stars