All Comments on 'Homebound Ch. 03'

The pace of this story is still way too slow for my tastes.

Awesome story but there's no incest yet just mother jacking off her son!! Love the story line it's a bit odd!!! Waiting on more chapters!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"The pace of this story is still way too slow for my tastes."

I do agree with this sentiment, and I'm the one writing it. Could it be faster pace? yes! in my hands? No, I'd bungle it somehow :/. so for this one at least its going to be a slooooooow burn, like 12ish chapters (I'm writing chp 9 rn).

I enjoy the pace of the story and of Max's growth. looking forward to chapter 4

I’m fine with the story moving slowly, although I would like to get to the meat and see if slowly progress from there. The editing, spelling, and grammar is still awful, but luckily this is hitting my fetishes just right

I really like this story! For being some of your first works in 8 years it's definitely not so bad.. Of course it's not perfect but it's plenty good enough that I'll likely be sticking around for the coming chapters, so I hope you keep at it!

Also, nice Morrowind reference at the beginning there lol.

Just average so far but still reading!!!!!!!!!!!