All Comments on 'Homebound Ch. 07'

7 chapters and he hasn't fucked Kelly..... 1/5's from here on out until he does.

The grammar is much better in this chapter compared to others, but there are still improvements that can be made, such as the angel/angle mix up. I enjoyed this chapter. You are improving as a writer.

Really happy that some part of my story could help inspire a much better one! Lol. Seriously, this is excellent. I'm really loving it, and I am very excited to read more.

thanks for the kind words Thomas, and I hope you and the rest of my readers wont be disappointed with the next chapter, its a fun one!