All Comments on 'Homecoming'

It was good. Just a little short. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Short and to the point.

Okay, but way too brief!

Nice first submission! I wish it was longer! But it was fun to read!

Thanks for writing!

Sorry it did nothing at all for me. It doesn't help when you're a first time writer and you make a glaring editorial mistake inside the first few lines. You don't give a fuck about the story so why should I? Of course you'll have the usual muppets braying about real loving wife bollocks. But it's not what they're really here for. They'd be much happier if you give them something to hate. Keep writing, you'll improve, and do try avoiding an agenda.

Sorry Troll, Your the one with an agenda!

Sure there were errors. It's the first entry, and I am sure every author on Lit is a professional writer. (NOT) So cut some slack! The next story might be a knockout!

I don't see any muppet but you!

So author I liked your short snippet! Please keep writing and ignore the anon dimwit/troll!

You started out well man, decent story! This would fit the erotic couplings category much better, though; Loving Wives is supposed to be ironic: it's really much more about naughty adventures of married women than happy married sex.

Are you fucking kidding me? Ironic my ass! I like good LW stories that are real LW stories ! Sure people put the other shit in here. But I like the true "Loving Wives, Husband stories.

You are just another dimwit with an agenda of some kind.

I liked your story and please continue in this vein! Thanks!

...I'd just go a bit further and add that the girl is not just a "real" loving wife. She is a budding bedroom goddess. Let her blossom please.

No wonder the score is so low. The wimps cucks and creampie lovers must have 1 bombed it.

A wife getting a little sex crazy with her husband after he returns from a business trip, HOT DAMN! AWESOME story line, nice writing and it all happened inside their own home with any whacko BS. BRAVO!! I am thoroughly impressed!

More enjoyable writing like this from authors who get it instead of that fucked up shit!!

Not what I was expecting, so I enjoyed it. One thing, her stomach was taut. Taught happens in school.

Not bad. I was shocked actually. The whole thing about the wife wanting to lease her husband after a business trip is usually the "After fucking Mark, 27 times a day and having so much cum in my pussy I looked pregnant, I really needed to feel loved by my wimpy pathetic husband"

See how shocked I was!!!