All Comments on 'Honeymoon Threesome'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just another sissy wimp husband giving his wife away because he knows he is inferior. Jack should come back and fuck both of them. Clearly hubby is a bitch in heat who needs to be put in his place

Aqua317Aqua317about 1 year ago

Wow, harsh comments, “Anonymous”. I’m surprised the title, tags and author’s trigger warning at the start didn’t prompt you to skip this one, since it’s obviously not your cup of tea.

Addicted098Addicted09812 months ago

Does she even have to ask if she hurt him ,? After telling the husband how long had the man lasted, asked for a cream pie, deeper fucking and the French kissing at the end there? The sex was quite hot & creative until the last part.

clingwrapclingwrap12 months agoAuthor

@Addicted098 hi, thank you for reading. Yeah, that dialog was originally several paragraphs long. I wasn't sure about it, so it was shortened into the 2 lines you read. Thanks for the comment, I always try to improve my weak spots.

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