All Comments on 'Hotel Mothers -- Illustrated!'

Thank you all for reading. I hope you've enjoyed this. Once again, thanks to the highly talented annabellebrito for the amazing artwork.

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Great story. Sexy. Love the set up. Could definitely use a follow up chapter or three.

Excellent art. Fits the story perfectly. Ripe for a sequel

Very impressive, I enjoyed it immensely. Can't wait for the next part. 👍

I find stories that involve people who are open to possibilities to be enjoyable. At the same time, it does remind me of how anal-retentive American society is in regards to physical contact. Back in the 196s, I was involved with two communes that were starting to work on the issues and became one of the leaders in sensitivity exercises working to address the fears. I know how difficult it is as to giving oneself the OK to be human completely.

I am amused and dismayed as to how even swinger groups prohibit contacts that "go against" the indoctrination from childhood. For example, two males getting worked up with each other and family groupings. Automatic expulsion.

Thanks for the story, with illustration.

Loved it

One of the few stories on this site where a sequel would be almost necessary. Great work and artwork too.

“ a real life mom/son blowjob-fest!”

My favorite line in the story. That’s a party I’d like to be in!

Great story. Five stars for sure. There is some room for some more or not, as you feel it. I'd read some more with great pleasure.

Good story. It calls for another chapter though..

This is great erotica...writing and illustrations combined!!

Five stars 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 ❤

Fun story!

Artwork adds immense pleasure and eroticism to the plot.

Would love a sequel….

Thank you to those that commented. There are a few unused images that we did not include due to the story evolving over time. I'm thinking of posting them on the site with some context regarding each scene. There is a two one is complete with a very different outcome to the story and another is Grace witnessing something shocking. I'll post them on Literotica soon. Thanks for enjoying my art.

Interesting take on the hotel circumstances for the room. Good story and good start to possible great series.

Terrific! And the illustrations are amazing. So well done!

I hope there is more to cum!

Would love for mom/son play Dr. with medical equipment

Just recognition that , " It's a damn if you do - damn if you don't world .

Good story. Great art work. Thank you.

Very Hot mom son story. Reminds me of another story where Moms take their Sons on vacation with them. Sure hope there's more to this story coming.

The illustrations are good. The tensions between Mom’s avowed Lesbianism and her desire for her son’s cock is both amusing and dramatic. I look forward to the Son starting to date. And Mom wanting to fuck both her Son to establish dominance over the interloper, but also because she truly bisexual and has the hots for her future, potential daughter-in-law.

Hot mom

Original and hot. 5 stars.

Silly enough to be fun.

Five stars.

Like the illustrstion, I think they are the same as Cruise Ship mom.

A good story. I was hoping for a deeper dive into the mon/son pool of self discovery. But, overall, a good begging and a very erotic topic.

There is one mom I would love to send to this hotel - my ex. She emasculated my son so badly she should have to make a man out of him.

Original sensual sexual of love between mother & son with extra enjoyment of both. Enjoyable to point of wondering where such hotel might be for future release

If i were trying to write or print this reply you would not be able to decipher the comment due to my shaking.

I think this was some of the silliest, yet somehow most arousing incest writing i have read here on Lit.

Normally within the first few lines I begin to find spelling errors, incomplete sentences, posting the same word twice as well as my pet peeve, The astounding over use of "AND" as a conjunctive where none is necessary or should have been replaced by maybe a better word or phrase. But I was so into the story I did not notice a single one of the aforementioned errors.

If there was something bad about this story, it had to be the abrupt "End" !

I thought that to be a cruel move to the readers by the author.

Interesting !

Would love to see a part 2 in which Grace tells Robert that they have conference and need to go back for 4 nights to the same accommodations because everywhere else was booked. Grace admits just prior to the trip that there is no conference and that she couldn't stop thinking about what happened. Robert admits that he also has been thinking about it. Both agree that the trip will occur. Grace mentions that when booking, the manager explained that things will be more intense and open for return guests.

Love the illustrations. The naked mature woman being pounded from behind is smoking hot.

Beautiful! Please may we have Chapter 2?This must go further! Maybe her Son has her pregnant already.?

Every illustration was perfect for the the activity going one. One of the most sensual stories I've ever read.

Annabelle here, I do have one unused alternative ending illustration as well as two unfinished images. I have tried to submit them here, but have not been able to under the erotica art section. Oh well...if anyone is interested, contact me directly on here. Please continue to support Literotica by leaving comments and rating the wonderful stories on here.

I like the story, I would love for it to be updated with newer / better illustrations and the inclusion of an abundance of pussy hair on the ladies.

Wow! This is one hot story. Sorry, Anonymous, be thankful you have illustrations. I thought they were pretty good, since they help move the story.

very hot story

Love it. Sexual terrific!

Encore, Encore.. plz tell me theres more to this story.. Since I know conferences are Bi-Anual at most or annual

Excellent!

Well, would have liked to have another chapter or two of the rest of the stay. Could she pass up any experiences with any of the other folks at the hotel?

5 Big Blazing Stars to writer and illustrator. Fun Read, no harm no fowl. Thanks, Buster2U

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Fun und Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

Chapter two. When Grace and Robert go back to their home, Robert fucks Grace while she is in the shower. Grace enjoys it so much that she and Robert sleep together every night and fuck every chance they have together. Robert impregnates Grace with his huge cock shooting hot jets of thick cum deep inside Grace's pussy filled with billions of his sperm. Robert continues to fuck and impregnate Grace and they have four babies. All of them have blonde hair and blue eyes just like Grace and Robert.