All Comments on 'Humiliation Punishment Pt. 04a'

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Slaveboy82Slaveboy82about 2 years agoAuthor

Oh dear, reviews worse than any. Sorry guys I’ll bow out with this one. Was a bit messy adding bits over a long period of time. Thanks for reading, I appreciate your time.

hadesshadessabout 2 years ago

that's a shame i am really enjoying this one and was looking forward to seeing what would happen next

your story and character are good and your writing is good

thank you for making it

and i'm sure whatever you do next will be good

Slaveboy82Slaveboy82about 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks it’s much appreciated. I just noticed the reviews weren’t great and figured it had lost interest. I do have the rest of part 4 mapped out so if there’s interest I will carry it on.

FacecuckFacecuckalmost 2 years ago

Very hot! Your stories are always inventive. The idea of the narrator licking her after sex with someone else was super hot and I hope you write more about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

very nice story, especially the spit- and eating scenes are soo hot.

pls continue...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ya keep it up

Like part 3

Something fresh

And fast if possible

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story and great writing. I’m loving goddess Claire more and more. How much more depravity can she dish out.

Slaveboy82Slaveboy82over 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you 4B is on the way and she has more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Checking daily for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’m also checking for next part regularly.

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