All Comments on 'Hung is Back in Town Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ALRIGHT I'm not enjoying this.

I normally enjoy your stories as there's generally a spirit/feeling of good fun and tongue in cheek humor, but this is starting to spiral into something a lot more malevolent.

While this can suit some people, there had better be a damn good reason he's getting treated like this.

Anyway, best of luck

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree with the other commentor. Its a typical and boring 'a bigger cock suddenly appeared and without a tought the relationship was destroyed' type of story. Not my cup of tea 0/5 if it was possible to give that.

dongstardongstarover 2 years agoAuthor

This is a commission so it's a bit of a departure from my usual stuff. NTR is a pretty controversial genre, so I can fully understand that some people aren't gonna like it.

EikmooEikmooover 2 years ago

I really like your story even though I am not a huge fan of ntr but Stephen's relationship with Veronica is kinda built around the cock. I don't feel like there is much love there just lust. Relationships built on cock deserves to be destroyed by cock ^^ also Jessica is hot!

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