All Comments on 'Hung is Back in Town Pt. 05'

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aquila21aquila21over 2 years ago

fufufufu, it backfired as i imagined

conehead69conehead69over 2 years ago

Frankly this is a quite silly story. I don't get the plot? Is it revenge with an abomination of a human? Where is the character developement in this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was good to a point but then it crossed over to bullshit

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Now you've got to finish it! :)

agerestriction0322agerestriction0322over 2 years ago

Wow, you go silent for a few months then BAM, an entire 5-parter in an instant. Well played!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is it possible for you to make a story that doesn’t include humiliation? I love everything about your stories except for that, please try to make people nice and understanding.

dongstardongstarover 2 years agoAuthor

@anonymous RE: humiliation: Valerie Song stories don't have much humiliation that I recall.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

INSANE

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