by dongstar
Frankly this is a quite silly story. I don't get the plot? Is it revenge with an abomination of a human? Where is the character developement in this story?
Wow, you go silent for a few months then BAM, an entire 5-parter in an instant. Well played!
Is it possible for you to make a story that doesn’t include humiliation? I love everything about your stories except for that, please try to make people nice and understanding.
@anonymous RE: humiliation: Valerie Song stories don't have much humiliation that I recall.