All Comments on 'IA: Will Gabby Succumb?'

Story keeps drawing you in. Nicely done.

I think this should be in the sci fi section. It’s a much better fit there

I love this story! Hopefully we can see more of Ari's reactions to Gabby, it's so hot that she gets aroused

Thank you so much for your feedback.

Ari will get her chance too :)

awesome story. Is there a chapter before this that is missing? I read Gabby gets a pet and this is next and there seems to be something missing in-between. This is series is amazing. keep it up.

@ArturHawkwing - you are right. I had submitted to two chapters but one of them got rejected. I have resubmitted it with changes requested. Hopefully it will be approved soon.

Do let me know your thoughts on the chapters so far.

Gabby's owner should find out that she is not completely broken and send her back for training while at the same time getting Ari to keep her end of deal and become a temporary pony who is tricked and sent to the same training as Gabby went through and then after training both Gabby & Ari realize they are happy and content as ponies and are happy to be owned.

Any luck with the rejected chapter?

Unfortunately no. It was rejected again :(

Ok traveling and holding on to the agreements ….. why not all the goblins and the wargs violently attacking gabby and enslaving her? …. Agreement!? Really ….. getting drugged and manipulated is something happening in RL too, but this was a nice surprise the fruits toxicity and abusing her senseless state of horniness to press some charges, great ….. blackmail par excellence like a submissive is videographed while a torture and sexual abuse and blackmailed with it. …. A little pressure might change your thoughts at heart and then submitting becomes much more happiness 😈

The most important deal is about the duchess and her baby plus anj to return peacefully home, hopefully this will be a safe way

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